You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks Which country would you like to visit Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice

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You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks.

Which country would you like to visit?

Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice

Traveling the world is something I have dreamed about doing ever since I was a small child. If I am ever given the chance to visit a country of my choosing, I will definitely go to Peru. There are two main reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, Peru is a land of unique landscapes and I believe that getting in touch with nature is the best way to enjoy a vacation. Peru is unique because it contains a tropical rainforest, some of the highest mountains in the world and even pristine beaches. Not only that, but they are all within fairly close proximity to each other. Few countries offer easier access to such a plethora of natural wonders. One similar country is the United States, which I visited about ten years ago. I remember that when I traveled across that country several years I was struck by how many different natural environments I was able to experience. I felt that seeing such scenes helped me really get to know America. I am confident that I could have a similar experience in Peru, and since that country is much smaller I would have an easier and more affordable vacation.

Secondly, Peru is attractive because it has an extremely varied national cuisine. I have heard that Peruvian food has been influenced by quite a few sources, including Spanish settlers, local indigenous groups and recent immigrants from the rest of the planet. Moreover, visitors to Peru can choose from several different dining venues, ranging from trendy modern restaurants to charming street vendors. I feel that eating the food of a place is another excellent way to really get in touch with a society. I recall that when I traveled to Japan during my last summer vacation I felt connected to the Japanese people when I visited a local sushi restaurant. I am certain that I would enjoy a similar feeling dining in Peru which would make a vacation in that country very worthwhile.

In conclusion, if I could visit any country in the world, I would choose to travel to Peru. I feel this way because of Peru’s amazing natural environment, and its tantalizing and varied national cuisine.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71010638298 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61646849161 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534574468085 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8387558047 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2105263158 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168121840875 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542154711551 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614400696936 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114275190379 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233011713816 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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