You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which
country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain
your choice
In today's modern world, traveling is a good idea for spending leisure time. Most of the people have dreamed about visiting a foreign country and I am no exception. I have thought about this opportunity from years ago and I have some ambitious plans for visiting India.there are two main reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I am major in architecture so it is very interesting for me to visit historical sait and old places and knowing about them. From an architecture standpoint, there are many fantastic and effective building in India. Without a doubt, the individual has heard about Tajmahal where has a remarkable architect and have located in AGRA. As A Result,I always dreamed of being there. The great architect of TAJMAH is the best practical course and helps me to find the true path out of classical architect design. By doing so, I can visit one of the best cities in India too, AGRA, where have many ancient temples and impressive buildings. I feel that seeing such places help me to improve the level of my creativity which is necessary for inventive architecture.
Secondly, India has many types of national cultures and cultivations so, It’s a very attractive place for me. I have read about the religious diversity in India and I enjoy knowing more about them. I feel that traveling to countries is a great way to really inform about beliefs . I recall that when a couple of my foreign friends, who were popular journalists, came to my country for researching religions; and they visited traditional places and meet indigenous people during last summer. Finally, at the end of the journey, they told me: “we understand better different aspects of your religion; Now we can write our essay about popular religions in your country”. I am certain that I would conceive similar information in India which would make a visit to that country very worthwhile.
In conclusion, if I could travel to any country in the world, I would choose to travel to India. I feel this way because of India's amazing Tajmah, and it is knowing about cultural diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83287671233 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7298076601 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8117474189 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230331318266 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707377617059 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067373163153 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147525402585 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780826828633 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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