Tourism is an important aspect that is non negligible. It gives one opportunity to experience another entirely different aspect of life, that one may not have experienced staying in one's own initial location, home or place of birth. The stimuli maintains that given a chance to visit some foreign country for two weeks, where would I prefer to visit. In my opinion, I would prefer to travel to the United State of America because of three reasons.
To begin with, most citizens of America are patriotic. For instance, in a movie titled America must be made great, I saw a character who depicted high sense of patriotism, seeing that I keep reminding myself that it would be a wonderful opportunity to visit such a country. In my country, I have witnessed good number of citizens who fail in their civic duty towards our dear nation. This goes on from those who led down through to those who flow those who lead. With such a scenario, I think going to other country, especially the US, would help me to learn to have the spirit of patriotism.
Further more, I would love to visit a nation that is liberal in their dealings with citizens. I come from where a citizen has no say that is, as a citizen, you have no right to criticise the actions of the government most especially those ones that are not favourable. For example watching a foreign news channel like the CNN, has made to understand that as a citizen of a particular country I have the legal right to point wrong policy that are put in place by a particular regime that is in power. But, in my country it is not the case. if you err out your opinion, you may get yourself into trouble; if you are not luck enough, it may even cost you your life. Hence, making a visit to other country would give the chance to express some sense of being free as an individual.
Still, I live in underdeveloped state. Being in an uncivilised state, had deprived me of the golden opportunity of utilising and attaining to my potentials and goals in life. For example, I love Bio-Chem as a course, I have the skills that it takes to explore and come out with inventions that would make a great impact to the entire globe. But the inability of my country to provide student with the necessary equipment and facilities had shattered most of us and has made our plans highly unachievable. But on the other hand, making a visit to country like the USA I would explore and do well in Bio-Chem.
To conclude, I would prefer to visit other nations outside my own territory because of the above reasons; in that, for the seek of patriotism, to be liberal and finally, to proper exposure to high Tech.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: maintain
...on, home or place of birth. The stimuli maintains that given a chance to visit some forei...
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...earn to have the spirit of patriotism. Further more, I would love to visit a na...
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Suggestion: those
...tions of the government most especially those ones that are not favourable. For example wa...
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Suggestion: If
... But, in my country it is not the case. if you err out your opinion, you may get y...
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...t other nations outside my own territory because of the above reasons; in that, f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52400835073 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56347710611 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490605427975 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3259973827 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.19047619 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8095238095 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297330834525 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805422864203 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760777517751 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160025332623 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858407695972 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.