Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Nowadays, the whole society is more concerned about the issue as to young people than ever, for the youngsters is a crucial part in the current society. Thus, almost everyone is engaged in the heated discussion over young people's behaviors. Quite a few, if not the majority, believe that young people give enough time to helping their communities, while in contrast, I consider that the youngsters actually do not spend enough time on communities.
First, with the unprecedented pressure existed in the society, young people have to work and study hardly. They spend almost all time on their career or learning, through which they could make a live. In contrast, helping their communities seems to be not a much important thing. Under this circumstances, young people would not spend much time on favoring their neighborhoods. Take my own experience for an example. I have already entered into a university. Every day, I face to a lot of tasks and assignments, and seldom is having a rest in my spare time, let alone helping communities. Thus, I suppose that, currently, young people do not give enough time for communities.
Furthermore, there are a wide variety of entertainments and recreational activities, which are appealing to young people than helping communities. No doubt that current youngsters have to find approaches to keep a balance between working and relaxation, they could be energetic when they found a proper way to ease off. However, helping communities is not a desirable way to relax, which even make young people feel more exhausted; thus, once youngsters have spare time, they would like to see a movie or do yoga in order to unwind themselves. A quintessential example would be myself. I would like to read a book or watch television during the weekends or vocation rather than helping out communities.
Granted, some believe that young people assist their communities from time to time, which is also reasonable to some extent. For example, there are some students who do volunteer works in their community in the summer or winter vocation. However, these students, if not the majority, just help their communities in order to meet the school’s the requirement, helping and supporting communities. Once they finish their task, they would not do such a favor again. It is clear that such a temporary assistant is not lasting. Therefore, technically, young people actually do not spend enough time on assistance for communities.
In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the aforementioned statement, I shall maintain that, presently, young people do not give enough time to help their communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16317016317 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97197586681 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491841491841 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0109628813 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3043478261 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.652173913 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365591022013 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112962184355 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100035867391 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249667439917 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064953754528 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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