Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It has been said before “a person can lead an army”, the question is who is that person? Some people see that young generations can not influence any society and determining their future. However, personally, I believe that young people have a great influence on societies and the powerful impact on their future as well.
Mark Zackurburgh, 23 years old, he is the founder of the Facebook company and the creator of the world commonly known as social media. He started to create a website that aims to gather a lot of people and ease their communication. Later on, this website became the world number one social media communication holding 1.2 billion users from around the world. The influence of Facebook has many effects on many societies. As an example, the Egyptian revolution in 2011 was started through a group of people of Facebook decided to remove the Egyptian president because of his injustice claims and acts. So, many people followed this Facebook revolution and in 2012 the president of Egypt was removed.
John Snow, 29 years old, was a lord of the Night Watch in the North and later became the king of the Seven Kingdoms. At first, he has raised a bustered boy and everyone was treating him harshly. Due to his powerful and strong personality and his strong battle fighting capabilities, he had many followers from different societies. He influenced olds, youngs, men, and even women. The seven kingdoms became settled and a peaceful place after he fought the Lansters and became followed by many people from around the country.
Mailey Sairus (Hannah Montanna), 18 years old, she is an American rock star singer. She has many followers worldwide. Many young teenagers tried to copy her act and attitude. Ms. Sairus changed the way people thing toward gays and lesbians. Before Ms. Sairus, many people from different cultures and societies disapprove gays and lesbians. Although, because Ms. Sairus is a lesbian lady and she has many fans who love her extremely, people started to accept gays and lesbians.
In conclusion, there are many young people who had a powerful impact on many societies. These most strong influencers are Mark Zackurburgh, John Snow, and Mailey Sairus. All of them did not even reach their 30s, yet they influenced many communities around the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ced many communities around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02337662338 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5789160307 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3299898654 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0869565217 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7391304348 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86956521739 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119207020362 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412614083381 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474071537438 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768940364117 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491182204069 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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