Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the dawn of the civilization, society strive to find the best program for their people's future. After thousands of years people came to this coclusion that they should hear all opinions about the possible plans and decide which route is the most beneficial for their future. As far as making important decisions and taking measures are concerned, some are of the opinion that young people don not have proper role in this matter these days, while others believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe to the later idea on the ground that nowadays parents and teachers care about the young one's independency, juveniles can readily reach any information they need, and authorities have changed their ways.
First, unlike the old days, parents provide any facilitate for their children and care about them. They know that they should pave the way for thier kids so they can make important decisions in their life. Also, the whole education system helps them in this way too. Children in the school learn about all the vissitudes of life and how they should react and make decision in tough situation. As a result pupils would be exprienced in decision making process and can be more involved in the significant decisions of the society.
Second, having comprehensive knowledge about the situation is a prerequisite to make a right decision which young people are endowed with these days. People did not have such an easily availible sources of information about everything in past decades. For example, if an young person wants to learn about the politic issues of their country so they can participate in the election, they can find any information about the candidates on the internet, TV, ect. Therefore, they would be capable of making the best decision.
Last but not the least, authorities now more rely on the young people than they did in the past. They inclined to give more responsibilities to the youngers because they know by the decades of experience that countries that use youth energy and eagerness will be thriving in their future. According to the statistics more and more young people are in charge of key roles of their societies every year, especially in the devepoled countries. This shows that young people are now more effective in their societies than they were in the past.
Finally, with all this taken into account, I do believe that young people have more roles in the important decision making of their countries. having the support of their teachers and families, accessability of them to any data they need, and new attitude of the governers to young people are the most conspicuous reasons that I think so. The whole world is reyling more and more to their young people these days.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ything in past decades. For example, if an young person wants to learn about the p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...ant decision making of their countries. having the support of their teachers and famil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94310722101 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52911454471 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477024070022 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0449793557 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.95 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.85 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160060670245 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626954556889 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481338162544 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109396558211 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525717479559 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.