Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship is one the most important aspects of life. There is a Persian proverb that states that, "First you say who are you living for and who is your friends, then I would tell you who you are".This proverb suggest that how much friends' influence on human's life is considerable. Everyone meets several people in his or her life and makes some friend among them who have a significant impact on his or her life. As much as making friends is concerned, some are of the opinion that being able to find many friends is more important than maintaining friendship with a small group of bodies while other believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe to the latter idea on the ground that old relationships are closer, reliable, and also last more.
To begin with, I can cite another Persian proverb which states that, "Everything is better when its new, except for the friendship". More precisely, when people spend many years together they adhere to each other more and more so much so that separating makes them upset. Therefore, long-lasting bonds are deeper and make mutually better senses.So, the further the friendship lasts, the stronger the relationship gets, and its preferable to temporary, artificial relations.
Secondly, there are some vicissitudes in the span of everyone's life in which they are in greatest need to help. Therefore, there must be some reliable friends to seek assistance from them. For instance, I had a money trouble when I was a student in collage two years ago. Thank to god, I had some friends with whom I was friend for about ten years, and they helped me through that problem. So, long-lasting friendships are more dependable and have more benefits for the people.
Last but not least, finding many friends needs to spend so much time with them, and if people can not manage them all they would lose them gradually. Hence, these friendships are more likely to be cut off. It stands to reason that, older relations last more.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that keeping friendship for a long time is better than finding several new friends, because we can a strong bond with them, they are more trustworthy, and also the relation can be more maintained. Wouldn't it be nice if can have some true friends instead of some superficial relationships?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, except for, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89420654912 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75246753083 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534005037783 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7991569722 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.944444444 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256491888282 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822289410123 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571504898678 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150535104857 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264901149778 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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