Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship is one of the many things that distinguish us from other creatures on this planet Earth. We, humans, have the ability to make choices; we can use our intelligence to deceive people or we can use the best of our abilities to be truthful and honest. I strongly support the latter idea, as the base of any prosperous relationships.
To start with, telling the truth enhances, confidence, builds tighter bonds and makes the relationship stronger. Let’s take, for example, the relationship among siblings, when they are truthful and honest to each other, these two characteristics stay with siblings through their lives. I, myself have two siblings, I know for sure whenever I need honest advice or opinion in personal or private matters, I can always count on my two siblings. Furthermore, their opinions might not be the one I want to hear, but nevertheless, they will always say what they have in their hearts, and I love them for that. On the other hand, if in cases, where siblings do not trust each other, they become lonely and unhappy people.
Secondly, a truthful person is always welcome and value for the strength of his character. For example, in the field of work, a professional that participates and points out not only the positive issues of the company but consider also the negative part or challenges to be improved in the company, are lookup as valuable assets to the company. Furthermore, these individuals, are usually the ones that are going to take the company to the next step up the ladder. Thus, making the company more competitive and profitable.
I do believe in my heart that it pays to be truthful. This, in the long run, will make you a better person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...ns might not be the one I want to hear, but nevertheless, they will always say what they have in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83561643836 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77073208322 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3873109451 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116225768659 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411937129655 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038522571034 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614590680955 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243378726149 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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