Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of revealing everything when two people are in realtionship. if I were forced to choose, I would definitily support the opinion that telling the truth is one of the key factor in a healthy relationship. it is my firm belief that to maintain a good relationship with anyone, a person must be honest with them, for a number of reasons, and I will develope these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
First, for a realtionship to be sucessful in long run, both people in relationship should have trust on each other. The truth is the key to build that trust. I have to agree that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, my best friend is the person, who has many people in his life, who he considers as "Girl-friend". he cheats his current girlfriend with new girls he meets every now and than. if he would have told his current girlfriend about it he would not have the existing relationship. it is clear from this that trust is the important factor in any relationship.
Secondly, although the timing of truth to be told may vary. For an instance a person may hide something from other person for time being can reveal it later on if the situation is not in the favor of the person on the recieving end. it is always must to tell the truth for a healthy realtionship. Drawing from my own experience, over the years my cousin has developed a bitter relationship his in-laws. she did not discussed it with her husband , assuming it might hurt her husbands feelings. Though, one day she talked to him regarding this and they both discussed it for long time and sorted it out. As a result, they have more strong bond they earlier used have.
In the lights of above mentioned points, I believe a person must be honest in all the relationship, whether be it with anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, as a result, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66568047337 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87397091904 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526627218935 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6567095984 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6111111111 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124115939086 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454463715641 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044462084628 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781818326678 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227626699567 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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