Do you agree or disagree that young people enjoy life more than older people do ??
No one can deny that there has been a ton of debates on who enjoys life more ?young people or old people. Although the definition of fun may vary from person to person, I couldn't agree more with the statement that young people do live life with more vigour and fun as compared with the older people. I firmly support the idea that young people are more fun loving, for a number of reasons, and I will explore this idea in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, young people are full of enegry and stamina. Adulthood is the prime time of a person's life. During this phase, the person has all the energy, time and source of entertainment to do activities which give sense of enjoyment and happiness. I have to admit that my opinion in this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. I remember, when I joined job three years back, I'd already made up my mind about how I would be spending my after office hours and weekends. The amount of money and time I had in the beginning gave a different sense of independence. I always hang out with my friends over weekend, playing board games, binge watching movies. This was a whole new experience for me and I throughly enjoyed it. It is clear that if I hadn't had the vigour and enthusiam to participate in these activies, I might not have enjoyed past three years.
Secondly, I believe young people have curious mind and want to explore the adventurous things. The adrenaline rush from performing adventurous tasks is what makes yonger people live their lives to the fullest. After all, adrenil is something that gives sense of enjoyment. For example, last year I went to a trekking trip to Manali, the emotion I felt on the end of the trek can not be defined in words. I also participated in a paragliding acticity which was cherry on the top. So, it was beacuse of the curiosity and eagerness for thrilling experience, I was able to feel the utter joy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, after all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59183673469 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59019155662 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574344023324 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4419460526 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266201321051 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712322495602 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899179801275 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184168186368 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135515419445 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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