There is no shortage of debate about whether people now living a happier life than the old times or the abnormal speed of the world change made them unsatisfied with their lives. In my opinion i think happiness and satisfaction is related with the person itself and not with the time. The happiness for me is a natural fact that do not depend on time or the place. I think this way for the reasons that i will explain in the following essay.
First of all, with the development of technologies the world is getting smaller, unlike the past now we can discover many places, find new friends, see the beauty of the atmosphere that surround as, everything becoming more easier to access, even if we are far away, we can talk always with family and friends. My experiences in life is a compelling example. When I was only 18 years old, I already travelled -traveled- to 3 countries, I had a lot of friends from different places, i was talking 3 languages. I was really opened to the world with the help of social media, and I am as many people really happy about how this world is now. At that age, my father have not this possibilities, but when the family gather all together and talk how they were also satisfied with their time at a young age and enjoying the world development i realize more that happiness is not related with the world changes .
Secondly, far away from social media and mean of entertainment that is oriented more to the young people, with the radical change, life now is more comfortable for old people, medicines is more developed, more medicament are available and difficult surgeries became easier, cars are more comfortable and this what makes old people satisfied with their life now as much as they were in the past.
To assume, I strongly believe that new area have nothing to do with the satisfaction of the humans, as life was simple and beautiful in the past like our ancestors claims the new life have also it charm .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5811965812 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54598740339 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.746592098 48.9658058833 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.181818182 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9090909091 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24317862004 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094068099709 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668198233271 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143326055334 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702192130606 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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