Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without the shodw of doubt, world has changed significantly during the history and at the past century it picked up the pace as a result of industrial revolution. Some people might say those who lived in the past were more happy. However, I personnaly think now a days life is more enjoyable. Among myriads reasons, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones, which persuaded me to put forward this idea.
First and foremost, the techonological advances during the past few decades influences the way people live at peresent time. In compare to the old times where individuals had limited access to medicins and curing a desease were like a nightmare, technology helps people now to live a more healthy life and in encounterment with a sickness, they can reac out to a doctor. For example, I remember my father had a heart attcat when he was at work around four years ago. His work was in one of the remote areas outside of the city. When he had the attack his coleagues just called emergency service and in ten minutes they were present at the seen without wasting any time the performed their basic tasks and just took my father to the hospital. If ot where the old time, there were no emergency service and even if it existed, the servise woul have been so slow that could not reach the place fast enough to perfome any thing and consequently I might have lost my father the my grandfather died because of the lack of emergency sevices.
The second reason one should take into account this significant that the life is much more exciting than it was before. In the past time people never new there existed a way for people to fly but now several instruments are invented to do so. For example, I love to fly. In the past there were nothing that human could do to fly and it was assumed that only birds can fly but in 2010 a person named Billy invented fabulous suit which can fly. This suit is called wing suit and people can go to a high point like a mountain an just jump without being worry about anything else. If it was the old times, It would have been only a wish but now flying is a reality.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that based upon the today's lifestyle people are more happy since life is more exciting and medical services are abundant. Actually there are some other reasons and examples advocated the claim which is not mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...more happy. However, I personnaly think now a days life is more enjoyable. Among myriads r...
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Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...appy. However, I personnaly think now a days life is more enjoyable. Among myriads r...
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Line 5, column 914, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... reach the place fast enough to perfome any thing and consequently I might have lost my f...
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Line 5, column 969, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...onsequently I might have lost my father the my grandfather died because of the lack of...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ore exciting than it was before. In the past time people never new there existed a way fo...
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Line 9, column 524, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... can go to a high point like a mountain an just jump without being worry about any...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...s to the conclusion that based upon the todays lifestyle people are more happy since l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53424657534 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40883052588 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8314905565 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196282231422 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567570174056 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517704675087 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114118614853 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00865591913198 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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