Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
One vote may affect country in Development. I disagree with the statement that children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote. At that age children will neither have maturity to think about good leader nor have knowledge about the work done by the leaders during their tenure.
Children at this age will not be mature enough to vote. They will not be able to understand the value of their vote as it may affect the country's growth. They may be attracted to false statements or promises made by the contestants without knowing the possibility of implementing them. For example, I know a guy who lives in my colony and during elections they have promised for an Air conditioning classroom in his school so he was attracted to that but in reality governement doesn't have budget for atleast getting good class teachers.
Voting also requires some knowledge about work done by the Leaders or Politicians during their term. They should know what kind of person he or she is before blindly voting. But at that age children doesn't have interest in watching news or reading news papers. They are much interested in watching cartoons and movies.
So until children achieve maturity of thinking about state or country they should not be allowed to vote as it may affect the country badly. As a Citizen of the country, I personally disagree with the statement made by the author.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81589958159 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53504006058 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535564853556 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5131710725 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5384615385 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217254489251 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104959455346 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145801605678 0.0737576698707 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157428877169 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828923463373 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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