Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
Children should follow their parent's set of rules
In the contemporary world, there is no shortage of debate about whether or not children follow their parents. As per my opinion, it is better for children to obey their parents. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, parents experienced, and they know how to handle the situation, therefore, and children follow them can easily escape from situations. When we are young, we are not matured enough to control the circumstances, because we don't have any prior knowledge about the condition; as a result, we make a lot of mistakes. However, if we follow our parents, it will not happen. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I had completed high school, I was interested in studying literature course as a major, But my father was refused and forced me to join in the health science. Moreover, he explained the consequences of studying literature course because he was a literature graduate. Now, I completed a Pharmacy degree at Ohio State University and working as a pharmacist. The total credit goes to my father.
Secondly, if the children follow their parent's rules, They wouldn't worry about their financials. Young children often face challenges to pay tuition fees because they don't have jobs. And also, it impacts on their education. If they follow the parent's ideas, they certainly support and no financial stress. For example, ten years ago, when my brother, whose name Alex was studying High school, parents wants him to join in the boarding school, and they are ready to pay his expenses. But he refuted their words and took the admission at the local school, and started doing the part-time job to pay his feeses. As a result, he was unable to manage both the job and the classes and got the least grades.
I am of the opinion that, following their parent's ideas is often significant for children. This is because their experience helps us to overcome the mistakes and challenges and because they give us financial support.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i feel, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85755813953 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67645113614 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1138358707 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.55 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177008864398 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603750428501 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658840264518 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119767579769 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030094521807 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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