What will your friend like and not like when visiting your hometown? Use examples and reasons to develop your argument.
when my friend has visited my home town, he has had a mixed opinion because he likes a few things such as exotic costumes and traditional believes and he had a bad experience of traffic and pollution which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the main asset of my home town Hyderabad, India is a unique dressing style; especially for ladies, they wear only sarees. Since sarees are designed with numerous colors, they are eye-catching. My friend came from a place where people don't wear sarees he has thrilled by seeing. For example, when he has reached my home, my mother wears a multi-colored saree which is made up of a thousand colors. That's a really nice memory for him because he never saw multiple colored saree before. On top of that, my grandmother explains the story behind a city and how the tradition developed in the Hyderabad and that is a great learning experience.
On the other hand, although he has had a great experience, he doesn't like traffic and pollution. India is one of the largest country and people uses a variety of motor vehicles for their daily work as a result, it generates a lot of traffic and pollution. For instance, when I and my friend visit Charminar, he has really frustrated with traffic because although it takes only ten minutes to reach Charminar from my place because of the traffic it took two hours and he doesn't like waiting.
In conclusion, although he has had a feeling of visiting a historical place, while he doesn't like few experiences create he has a varied opinion. Personally, I recommend my friends ready to face all the challenges when we visit a new place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65743944637 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66130233948 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2772588966 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 5.45110844103 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106088418641 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435777449371 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370166853182 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837163104716 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339182481764 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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