Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the twentieth century, people are often addicted to a luxurious lifestyle because everyone wants to explore their rich life. so, there has been no shortage of debate on future lifestyle; especially whether or not cars usage increase. however, the question is does the people would show the same interest in the future. Some people believe it is sure that car usage will be double in the future because it is a status symbol. On the other hand, I personally believe there might be fewer people prefer to use cars in the future for reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To Begin with, cars are increasing pollution gradually which leads to environmental pollution. cars and other vehicles often release hazardous chemicals into the air and it turns into deoxygenated air; Hence, poor health conditions. My uncle Felix is a good example to illustrates this. When I was ten years old he was living in the new york city; working as a car mechanic. Initially, his health condition was good but later he diagnosed with lung cancer because he often exposed to pollutants in the company as well as from the city traffic. as a result, he stopped using his personal vehicle and resigned to his job. this example clearly illustrates the risk of using cars
In addition to that, people who use cars frequently increasing their expenses because they need to spend money on fuel and insurance; so it is difficult to manage with low income. Since the cost of living gradually increasing, people are considering public transport instead of own car. my Friend Steve is the best example to describe this. he had a gifted car from his father. However, when we were working in a software company; we got very less pay: as a result, it is very difficult for him to manage he stated using public transport.
In conclusion, although some may disagree, By considering all the above consequences I feel in the next twenty years people might get realize and limit the use of cars. Because it is good for health as well as more expensive. Hence, I think people need to understand the situation and need to control the use of cars
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73983739837 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59445148949 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547425474255 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1095220131 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0526315789 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206000411591 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598663950788 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575357529982 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122979211881 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132676243555 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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