what are the advantages and disadvantages of owning a car? Use examples and reasons to develop your argument.
In the twentieth century, personal vehicle has played a prominent role in daily life. It has both advantages and disadvantages, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the benefit of having a car is, it saves a lot of time. If people have a motor vehicle, they can start their journey without waiting for public transportation such as bus, train. For example, when I was studying at University for my master's degree, my classmates are planned to go to the Niagara waterfall. Although first, we decided to by train since we don,t gets the reservation we go by individual cars. What more, we save a lot of time because we don't need to waite every station. I feel this is not possible if we go by train.
In addition, the personal car helps people to go to work on time. If the employee has their own vehicle, they can easily reach the destination on time by using a short route. My personal experience is a good example to explain this. When I was working in software, I use to stay three miles away from my workplace. However, it took me thirty minutes by bus because of the traffic and I never been reached to work on time. As a result, I brought a new car and it helps me to reach my work on time.
On the other hand, cars maintenance are expensive and it is difficult for everyone to afford. For example, my friend Ram buy a new car with his father's financial support. Since the fuel price and the insurance went up, he couldn't afford it, as a result, he has stopped using his car and started preferring public transportation.
In the final analysis, I contend that having a personal car has both pro's and con's and it all depends on the people financial status. If the people had enough money to buy a car, it saves a lot of time and if they don't have it is expensive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...car, it saves a lot of time and if they dont have it is expensive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35820895522 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.593076444 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531343283582 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4657177399 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8421052632 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118260866747 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375265778873 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278133240095 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621062334154 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280301283715 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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