University education should be free. Do you agree or disagree? Why? Use examples and reasons to develop your argument
A university education is essential aspect of someone's life. I stand of the opinion that should be free for everyone and I will explain why i feel this way in the following paragraphs.
First of all, numerous students yearn to experience university's life, however they can't afford it due to the high fees. Consequently, this lead them to the labor market in the early age and hinder their dreams. A friend of mine is a compelling example of this. When we were in a high school together, he achieved perfect scores in every subject's exam, though his truly passion were biology and chemistry. He was living only with his grandparents and their pensions were not sufficient to help him after with university fees. Therefore, he went to work on river cruise ships to save money and pay for his university. This example in turn, shows that many students with outstanding qualities and huge potential can not reveal or develop it, most likely due to financial issues.
Second, education should be free form economic point of view. There are cases in which students take intrepid actions and take loans in order to pay for semester, books, tutor etc. This engagement however, will have deleterious effect in the student's future in terms of financial expenses. Encumbering with debts with lead to delay of buying a car or house in the student's future, because they will be suppressed to pay installments. If the university education was free, this would have considerably boosted the economy.
Ultimately, the biggest advantages for free education will be that majority of the students can fulfill their dreams and fight for better job and future. Also can contribute for the national economy as boost it up and helps attain sustainable life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: subjects'; subject's
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Suggestion: Also,
...ms and fight for better job and future. Also can contribute for the national economy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95205479452 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67447993727 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61301369863 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5124975971 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156468344051 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569104725147 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626477497846 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110360938548 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566522988253 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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