the reading passage advice several ways to retrieve salt lake water from excessive salt, while the lecture disagrees with it. summarise the points.
The reading suggests several ways to retrieve the salt lake from excessive salinity and it provides three reasons to support it, while the lecture states that although it is a good idea to reduce the salinity, the ways that mentioned in the reading are not realistic and practical.
First of all, the passage claims that direct removal fo salt by the heating process using special facilities because it holds back the salt materials. however, the lecture argues that it has several problems, especially health issues. According to the professor, the solid particles behind after the evaporation process contain salt and other toxic chemicals such as selenium. and it causes severe respiratory problems.
Second, the passage posits that salt lake excessive salinity would be revert with dilution because the salt concentration at the Pacific ocean near the lake is less. The lecture counters this point by saying that even though it is a great idea to reduce the salt concentration, it need pipelines and canals and costs more to construct. Moreover, the local government don't have enough fund to spend on building pipelines and Canales.
Lately, the reading passage contends that building a wall to divide the lake and allow a smaller portion for saltwater and the rest of the chambers for healthy water. The professor cats doubt on this point by saying that it is not a permanent solution because if any disaster happens, the wall would distract, as a result, the salt water mix with healthy water.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...cause it holds back the salt materials. however, the lecture argues that it has several...
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Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...other toxic chemicals such as selenium. and it causes severe respiratory problems. ...
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Line 2, column 420, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it causes severe respiratory problems. Second, the passage posits that salt lak...
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Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nstruct. Moreover, the local government dont have enough fund to spend on building p...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07661290323 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54212365748 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576612903226 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5076795282 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.9 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419999714665 0.272083759551 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130946529545 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105953729171 0.0662205650399 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233717490726 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090847203279 0.0443174109184 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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