Which technology has changed your life the most? Use examples and reasons to develop your argument.
In the contemporary world, technology is playing a prominent role. We are using technology for numerous purposes; such as communication, online shopping, and so on. So there is no shortage of debate about how technology influences people. If I asked, the internet played a significant role in my life for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the internet helped me to get a job. When I was searching for a job after my graduation, The internet access supported me a lot for designing my resume-A. When I was developing my resume, sample resumes from the internet helped a lot. The corporate company was selected my resume and called me for an interview. What’s more, I got a job in a big corporate company with a nice package. Technology changed my lifestyle.
Second, when I was doing my thesis for my master's degree, the internet plays a vital role. When I was doing project work for my graduation, my topic was new. My project manager has given me a suggestion to refer the internet for resources. When I was started searching for information related research topic, I got plenty of information which helped me to finish my thesis within the time period. On top of that, my research paper selected for publication in international journals. Personally, I contend, technology played a prominent role in my career.
In conclusion, although some people said internet distract the people because of unwanted websites, I am the witness for the Importance of Internet in the people lives because it helped while attending the interviews and my time-sensitive projects. I personally recommend people to use the internet for useful purpose rater misuse because it makes your work easy and precise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97594501718 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99841126553 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7621047906 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4444444444 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877545417365 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389075460845 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502376763814 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636498589398 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393467790418 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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