Some people believe, the best of learning about life is listening to the advice of their friends and families, while others believe it should be learn through personal experience. Which do you prefer and why?
In life, people follow different strategies for the better understanding of their life. So there has been no shortage of the debate for the better strategies. However, the question t which is best choice for understanding of life? Some people believe, it is better to follow their relatives’ suggestions; they came across all the difficulties so it is easy to rectify those mistakes in our life. However, I personally believe, the better way to understand the life is through our routine experience for reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, although sometimes the mistakes we made in life are expensive, through personal experience, we never repeat those errors in the future because we know the pain. When we are in the young age, most of the time we ignore the elders suggestion, because we does not know the consequence of that issue. My personal experience is the best example for this. When was preparing for the pharmacist Licence exam, most of my friends suggested me to prepare Tofel exam first rather fpgee, because it is so hard and it took time to pass. However, I ignored their suggestions and I prepared and clear the fpgee exam first, as result, still I am struggling with English exam. Of course, it is an expensive mistake because it kills a lot of time but I never forget this experience.
In addition to that, personal experience seems like difficult at that time, but it become a good lessons for the remaining life. Most of the young adults ignore their parent’s suggestions, because they think, they know everything. However, if they personally experience the same issue, they will realize the fact. My friend rajiv is the best example for this. When we were studying at the university, he always though that he knew every thing , As a result, he end up with two backlogs in the last semester. Even though it cost more to repeat those subjects, he was realized and change his attitude in the further classes. This example clearly shows the importance of the real life experience. Because , I don’t think so he will change with others suggestion.
In sum, although friends and family suggestions are important, personal experience always has high priority. Real life experience make them people to stong and though valuable lesions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, in addition, of course, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9481865285 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76310296891 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520725388601 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6876123742 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9523809524 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149795061852 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526921826573 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407972894344 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963439071355 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363954736705 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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