Some people prefer to eat at food stand or restaurant. other people prefer to prepare and eat at home. Which one do you prefer, use specific reasons and examples to support?
in twentieth century, time is very precious, people don't have enough time to spend on preparing food, rather they are choosing a fast food restaurant for reasons I will explore in the following essay.
to begin with, it is not necessary to spend time on cooking, readily available food at the restaurant save a lot of time. Particularly, employers don't have time for preparing food because of the uneven shifts they become tied. My Friend Alex is the best example to illustrate this. when we were working at softech solutions; a software company at Florida. Initially, he used to prepare his own food but as the workload increase, he started to eat at the company canteen because he became exhausted at the end of the day and he doesn't have time for cooking
In addition to saving time, food at the hotel is cheaper than own preparation because the cost of ingredients is expensive. Moreover, if we didn't select quality ingredients, it spoils the health. On the other hand, most of the food centers are FDA (food and drug approved) certified, they maintain quality food with affordable. I explore my personal experience as an example to explain this. when I was studying my master degree, at Ohio state university I used to had my food at college canteen because it is pretty cheap. in addition to that, canteen provides different curries every day. it is not possible for me if I prepare my self.
In conclusion, although some people disagree, I personally feel that restaurant food is the best option in the current days because it saves a lot of money and time. i recommend people to consider hotel food, rather preparing themselves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78445229682 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67374210653 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5077406142 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213200525213 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704582590208 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461183889408 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135495225071 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207154999007 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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