It is obvious that in today's fast-paced word all companies are trying to develop their conditions and increase the level of knowledge of their employees in order to achieve their goals easier and faster. Some people assert that it is employees' duty to pay for their own education and getting a university degree; however, I believe that it is better for companies to assign some of their budgets to their employees in order to improve their academic degree. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think one of the best strategies that companies can use in order to enhance their conditions from in various field is to financially support their workers to get a university degree. Financial aids will encourage them to continue their studies which will be beneficial for both them and the company. In other words, when the number of people who work in a company and possess university degree is more, it will cause the rank of the company to become higher among other companies. Therefore, the company will grow faster and meet its goals faster.
Moreover, I believe that because some people do not have good financial conditions, they will have to enter job market before they could get a college or university degree. As a result, companies should provide them with some money so that they are able to increase their knowledge. Also, in some case, companies have workers who have worked for years there and have a lot of experience; but the development of technology have required them to study at university so that they gain enough knowledge to do their work. For instance, I worked in a company for many years ago, the manger paid for some employees to get an academic degree because with the advent of new and advanced engineering software they could not work with them. As a result, they could do their work after graduation from university.
To sum up, in my point of, companies can take advantage of dedicating money to their employees. It will not only persuade them to continue their studies but also help the company improve its rank and fulfill its objectives in the best way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fulfill its objectives in the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80758807588 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54290378842 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471544715447 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8948483356 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245455945481 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884220809433 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620809792334 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142404570858 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624940161326 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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