There is some disagreement over whether investment of government on environmental protection is more important than on economy. Of course, few would say that a country’s healthy environment circumstance plays a vital role in providing its people with high quality of living standard and it is necessary to their lives. From my view, however, only emphasizing the priority of the investment on environmental protection, the speaker ignores economic concerns of a country, which is an essential qualification to improve and keep the environment.
To begin, it is undeniable that without continuously supports of government, it would be a useless investment of government’s budget in protecting environmental condition. When it comes to a government that has poor and unstable economy, even though, the government uses its money to solve an environmental problem in its country, this financial support cannot be continuous, further it cannot have any influence on the problem. For instance, the Korean government when its economy was not stable, the government invested lots of its finance on the environmental problems of the Han River’s circumstances. However, it could continue only few months, the problems were not solved but also there was no change in the circumstances. This implies that focusing on government’s budget on the environmental problems does not have a positive influence on the problems without consideration of its economy.
Furthermore, the limitation of the concept that financial aims of government should be concentrate on environmental concerns than on economy, can be found in terms of the importance of economy on success of environmental protection. It is not difficult to observe that a government with several serious problems in its economy, its efforts on the environmental problems cannot make desirable results because the poor economy condition prevents its citizens from having environmental awareness. According to a study conducted by researchers of a team at Harvard University, they found a fact that more people with healthy economic condition tend to have well-developed environmental consciousness. The study also revealed that government’s investment on environmental concerns is more possible to be successful with the people. This example shows that government cannot ignore the importance of economy because it is necessary factor for protecting the environment.
To sum, despite of the importance of the environmental problems, both the role of government financial supports and the citizens’ environmental consciousness with healthy economic conditions, tell us that government’s investment on economy is more important than on environmental protection.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concentrated'?
Suggestion: concentrated
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254777070064 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.116772823779 0.158761421928 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112526539278 0.0866891130778 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0424628450106 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0445859872611 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152866242038 0.118717715034 129% => OK
Participles: 0.0233545647558 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.61843177021 2.67179642975 135% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212314225053 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0955414012739 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0191082802548 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00849256900212 0.0139019557991 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2743.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 404.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.7896039604 5.86048508987 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.44801980198 0.338922669872 132% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.403465346535 0.251872472559 160% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.309405940594 0.174417080927 177% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.222772277228 0.112833075102 197% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.61843177021 2.67179642975 135% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455445544554 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.7343509039 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 28.8571428571 20.5533526081 140% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4638920684 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.928571429 120.699889404 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 20.5533526081 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 69.2036775106 45.7405998639 151% => OK
Elegance: 2.11458333333 1.45489161554 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314749486459 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165018043733 0.103427244359 160% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0599870520658 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.60245169802 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147489609663 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165236393413 0.114077575197 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755233644481 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.561625251381 0.336927656856 167% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0910842672938 0.067059652881 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258223281557 0.210909579961 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261257867844 0.0618886996521 42% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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