Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would he more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without the shadow of doubt, job plays an important role people's life since we are occupied with it at least eight hours per day. So it is important for a job to be satisfactory and secure at the same time but I personally think people should take the secure opportunity.
My first and foremost reason is that people need money to live a life. Having enough and permanent income means being able to plan the future and as a result a person with a secure job is more satisfied with the life than a jobless person. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have studied in one of the best universities of Iran and as a result I had a high criteria for defining a satisfactory job. So every job I had found looked doll to me and as a consequence I had been with no job for a long time which meant having no money. By passing the time I recognize that I was wasting my life waiting for the right position since I had no money and I had to live with a lot of precaution. Now I have more budget to spend since I am working in a big company with asecure position and I am advancing because I can plan for my income.
Second reasone one should take into account is the more secure the job, the less one should be worried of loosing it. Not worring about loosing the job is really valubale since one should provide for the family too. For example, a friend of mine whose name was Billy had a wife and his wife does not work so their only budget is provided through his income. Billy had a job which he loved but the job was highly dependent on the economical state of the country. Around four years ago the company he was working at broke an as a result he lost his job. After loosing his job, his family ecxperienced a real crisis since they had no money to relay on. The loss of his job almost caused him to lose his wife because he could not provide for her. Evantualy he agreed to work in govermental institute since it was more secure and now he live in peace as a result of not being worry about becoming jobless.
last but not the least explaination for accepting a secure job is that an advantage of having such a job is not having to think about what will happen in the future so you are going to have a more stable life with less fluctuation as I prefere. For example my causing who lives in USA once told me that he love the sence of adventure and as a result when he lost his job because of the united states' economical collaps he did not feel any hardship but for me it is realy hard to think about loosing my job.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples peresuaded me to choose a secure job over waiting for a satisfying one because not having to worry abou loosing my job and making money was more important for me.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: criterion
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Message: Did you mean 'losing the'?
Suggestion: losing the
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Suggestion: Last
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, so, at least, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21428571429 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35910268564 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436090225564 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6635547604 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311122137781 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110396176604 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520766981496 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198758384557 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157184577739 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.