Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
In any relationship, always telling the truth is the most important consideration.
In Mongolian idiom, it believes that telling truth it is faster than telling lies. However, nowadays, people tend to keep their secret for expecting better result and better behaviour because some people like lies even they wanted truth as I observed. Even though, short-lies makes people happy, its future consequences are more dangerous than telling truth on time. Therefore, I would agree with the statement that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. I have three different statement in different relationship why I agree with telling truth is important.
First of all, I would like promote benefits of telling truth in partner relationship. As two people live together from difference family culture and different behaviour to become one, trust is the most essential part. To build the most ductile trust, we always should telling truth to each other. For example, my husband and I never keep any secret from us, this helps us to build trust that brings happiness to our live.
Secondly, friendship trust. Of course, by telling truth with your friends, he or she will tell their secret without any doubt. Hence, friendship will build strongly. When I was in University, I met a shy girl who is my today's best friend. We spend more time together by without keeping any secret which helps us to become friends easily in short period. Hence, I would like to say that telling truth helps us to make friend easily.
Lastly, we spend most of our time in workplace for earning money, improving life and career. During the project or work, hiding truth might lead to failure or insecure relationship with supervisor. Instead, by telling truth all the time, your supervisor or boss will evaluate you. For instance, once my boss says that he believe person who is honest and can tell secret without hiding anything
In conclusion, in any relation ship telling truth makes our life more easy and happy by bringing strong trust between individuals. For this reason I would definitely agree with the statement that truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
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Suggestion:
...any relationship. I have three different statement in different relationship why ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03133903134 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60230796039 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524216524217 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9705181202 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357246497759 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126862225703 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138241090142 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220387205611 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957464746707 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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