Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.
Whenever it comes to the issue whether students works more effectively when they work as team than when they as asked to work alone in project, there are never short of discussions and arguments. Although working alone with high effectiveness sounds asppealing to some extent, because most of them concentrate better when they alone, as fas as I am concerned, I would still prefer work as a team is more effective way. Even though there stand hundreds of reasons behind my preference, I would only explore some of them here.
First of my reasoning would be that working as team encourage students to understand the concept better, because most students learn from each other well. For example, when I was freshman year in collage I always late from information such as student compitation, test preparation, and sometimes it made my situation worse due to absence of preparation of test. But one semester later, my professor helped me to solve this issue by diving class by few team. So that it makes my situation more better and impove my grades also. In my opinion, working as team is one of good way to improve grades.
Secondly, in addition to improvement of class, it is also helps us to learn new habit which is helpful our future career. By working together I learned to organize my work better and done project more efficiently in less time. For instance, teamwork ability is written in first line of the job reqiurements because most employee desire us to have high skill of team work to done projects with perfect arrangement. So, this skill is enhancing our chance to hire.
Last but not least, besides these two examples one best advantage of team work is find your ability and your hidden talents. The team work is consist with people who have same goal with different ability so that they accomplish project faster because each person have different skills. It means team members do different thing which they know best. So that they found their unreplaceable ability. There is example of my own life. When I was working as team I learned that I find the information more faster than others which ability I never knew.
Therefore, when it comes to the decision, I would defenitely agree that working together is more effective way to learn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as team 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...more effectively when they work as team than when they as asked to work alone in pro...
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Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun team seems to be countable; consider using: 'few teams'.
Suggestion: few teams
... to solve this issue by diving class by few team. So that it makes my situation more bet...
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Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...few team. So that it makes my situation more better and impove my grades also. In my opinio...
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Line 2, column 521, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...uation more better and impove my grades also. In my opinion, working as team is one ...
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Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
...d your hidden talents. The team work is consist with people who have same goal with dif...
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Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o different thing which they know best. So that they found their unreplaceable ability....
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Line 4, column 495, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...m I learned that I find the information more faster than others which ability I never knew....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81233933162 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56899172425 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53470437018 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5966379342 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5263157895 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340563062482 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106673416396 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111553475191 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21108698997 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847378687732 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.