Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being well-informed is crucial for our lives. It is when we know about the facts that are happening in the world, which some of them could directly affect our lives. Some people would believe that using only one news source is enough to be well-informed; other would disagree. In my view, getting information from many different news sources is mandatory to be well-informed for two important reasons.
The main reason is that we can get different points of view. In order to create an unbiased summary about an information it is very important to use different sources. Today we have almost an infinite number of places that we can read or watch news, coming from mainstream medias to independent ones. Also, it is possible to classify them about their views, such as left- or right-wings of thought. For example, there is a very controversial change that politics in my country are trying to approve. It is about the reduction of cost from the public retirement system. Nowadays, my country is spending almost one quarter of tax's revenue to pay retirement. In that way, there are a lot of different opinions about that. The more traditional media is against this change because they say that it will increase the age that workers will be able to retire. Conversely, more independent media, like youtube and facebook channels are supporting this reform, they claim that it will increase the public investment on more important areas, such as health and education. In that way, using differents sources I was able to create a very broad image from the situation and, in fact, I believe that this change will be good to my nation. So, I have a different opinion from majority of the television and newspaper sources. This event clearly demonstrated that in order to be well-informed, we need to get information from many different sources.
Another reason is that we could discover more reliable news sources. Many people just stay with one or two sources of news. However, we can find a lot of very interesting ones just searching for information. For instance, my parents for almost twenty years used the same newspaper as their main source of information. However, on the last months they are complaining that the news are becoming very superficial, without the same depth that they read on the early versions. Therefore, they bought a different newspaper from another company to try out. For their surprise the new one was very good, indeed it was better than the old model that they always liked. In conclusion, nowadays they stopped using the first newspaper and are only buying the new source that they discovered. This experience taught me that is very important to get information from many different news sources.
In sum, though some may believe that getting information just from one reliable news source is enough, I believe that using many different sources is better. Not only we can create an unbiased view about the news but also we could find new sources of information. Everyone should work to introduce more news sources in their lives to see all the benefits that this act could bring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2588.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91081593928 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65484222915 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447817836812 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6564063016 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2413793103 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1724137931 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03448275862 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220666766102 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728661544733 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824802340214 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151804093792 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441180614479 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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