Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Parents play an undeniable, prominent role, in their children's life. Throughout a child's life, parents, most of the times, if not always, do their best to help their child flourish. Consulting parents, when one's put in a tough situation is the most common thing children do. However, children nowadays, unlike the past, don't rely on parent's guidance solely, since they have access to more source of information and are more of an independent individual.
First and foremost, in comparison to the past, children have access to more sources of information and are not mostly restricted to their parents' knowledge. It is crystal- clear that, due to the germination of technology, children can have access to an abundant source of information readily. as an example, most of the teenagers have the access to the internet, via which, they can talk to a lot of people, all around the globe. in addition, they can access to an enormous amount of information, all gathered in websites, notably Wikipedia. as a result, the source of the information have had changed during the past decades, from parents, as the most reliable source of knowledge, to the internet and trustable websites.
Secondly, young people, unlike the past, are less dependant on their parents, they don't obey them without a question, like what they almost did before. In fact, the emotional bonds between parents and children, have had reduced in the past generations. a reason to be considered for explaining this fact is, due to an accelerating pressure from the society on families, people are more concern about their jobs, rents and hectic life, than they are about their families. they spend less and less time together which results in the weakening of relation between parents and their children. as a result, children get less influenced by the advice of their parents and feel like no one understands them as well as their own selves do.
All in all, according to aforementioned reasons above, nowadays young people don't rely on their parents to make decisions, since they have access to more information and are less connected to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06267806268 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71379148938 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504273504274 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9013227294 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194642741317 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733641384476 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604177131221 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137916403253 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733307801286 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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