Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern life is a very complex network of issues. People have to know some skills to confident and success in life, such as the ability of communication, independence and some other soft skill. Some people argued that today young people have more opportunities to decide their life than young people in the past. In my opinion, I agree with this point. Today young people enable to make decisions in not only normal issues but also some important issues.
People today have a lot of things to care and solve, and sometimes they do not have enough time to care about all issue around them, including their children. Other reason is parent have their goals when permit their children do that. In this case, children face with the situation that when a problem come to them, they must have their own decision. Those decisions can be very normal like taking part in a club in school or choosing friends. However, sometimes they are essential issues, especially when young people decide their university or their jobs in the future. I believe that it is good chance for young people to mature and fulfill their skill. Making decision is very important skill that all people must have if they want to success in modern life. When young people have to make their own decide, they will build this skill gradually. In basically, this is a good way for young people to develop themselves.
Additionally, young people, especially in puberty, they often do not listen the advice from their parent. I mean it is a normal development in biological projects of every people. However, this biological period of young people today is difference form that in the past. One reason is able because the altering in the thinking way of parents. Parents today have trend for their children to independent early, so they want their children make decision when they still young. Nevertheless, parents in the past were not in this way, they wanted to control all issue of their children because they thought that was good for their children. Other reason can be today young people have more chances to access to the outside world and they have more passion to decide their life than in the past. In basically, I claim that making decisions when people are young is good for both young people and their parents.
Some people say that making decision could make young people do the wrong things and have negative impact in future of these young people. Meanwhile, I believe that this is just their short sight, people must fail to develop, this is also a good way for young people mature.
In conclusion, I want to repeat the role of deciding skill in the development of each people. Parents should give their children to make decision early. In this way, parents are helping their children more mature and have more opportunities to success in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'trended'.
Suggestion: trended
...king way of parents. Parents today have trend for their children to independent early...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, while, i mean, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79098360656 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33873517293 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399590163934 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4392859082 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5925925926 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0740740741 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.74074074074 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417980848425 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148603286863 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952554400901 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281566253018 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760981607346 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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