Human life is analogous to the torture path in mountain in quite a few aspects. It is crystal clear that mountains path have a lots of ups and downs which remains us that human life is replete with a lot of hardship and joyfulness. In order to overcome these barriers and reach the destined goal, making a rational and also correct decisions is necessary, especially for young people since they suffer from the lack of experiences. Some people believe, In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them, On the other hand many believes otherwise. I , for one, subscribe to the latter one on account of some conspicuous reasons which elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, as the time passes and society become more developed, parent become more aware of their roles toward their children, since they are the major guardian of them. They cannot tolerate the witnessing their children misery and hardship. So they try their best to guide their children in the best way. Making a critical decisions, take for instance, opting the field of study, future occupation and so forth are some fields in which parents help their children with their knowledge. There is a subtle point that parents should consider, the consulting should not exceed in a way that they meddle in their children affairs. They should allow the children to make their own decisions.
Without hesitation, making important decisions without consulting expertise and experienced persons will lead to inaccurate and sometimes catastrophic results. By developing society, Children, nowadays are more knowledgeable in comparison with past and they are definitely cognizant of the importance of choosing the proper adviser. In this regard, since the parents are the closet person to children and they know all aspects of their children ability, personality, characteristic, to name a few, children will ask them for help while they are making pivotal decisions.
Last but not least, It has been psychologically proved that, new generation tends to be more dependent to their parents in compare to past. Recent survey in Tehran university revealed that 35 percent of the young children under 32 are living off their parents. So it stands to reasons that other parts of the young children ,beside the monetary aspects, are being under influence of their parents, like making decisions.
In a nutshell, grounded on the above statements, I can safely draw a conclusion that young people are depended too much on their parents in comparison with the past. there are manifold argument in support of this hypothesis. Developing parents knowledge about their role, awareness of the children about importance of consulting and dependency of them to their parent are some of a which with great importance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mountains'' or 'mountain's'?
Suggestion: mountains'; mountain's
...a few aspects. It is crystal clear that mountains path have a lots of ups and downs which...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
... crystal clear that mountains path have a lots of ups and downs which remains us that ...
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Line 1, column 587, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he other hand many believes otherwise. I , for one, subscribe to the latter one on...
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Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decision'?
Suggestion: decision
...dren in the best way. Making a critical decisions, take for instance, opting the field of...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'reason'.
Suggestion: reason
...ving off their parents. So it stands to reasons that other parts of the young children ...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s that other parts of the young children ,beside the monetary aspects, are being u...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ir parents in comparison with the past. there are manifold argument in support of thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14473684211 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71929185897 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517543859649 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5744641928 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361313520455 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118242083566 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102586142412 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217790949901 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734116843596 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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