Without any shadow of doubt, young people, as the cornerstone of any developed community, are the most significant part of society, since the advancement, economic wellbeing and many other aspects of society are directly related to them. Some people believe that, nowadays, the landmark decisions as to the future of society are made without influence of young stratum, However other believes otherwise. I, for one subscribe to the later perception and incline to the group that avers, the young people play an important role in making a policy and decision about society. I take this view, on account of some conspicuous reasons which elaborate upon hereunder:
First and foremost, we should consider that, the main goal of any decision about future of society is nothing except, the welfare and comfort of its people. Finding appropriate occupation with decent salary, providing suitable house, schooling facilities ,to name but a few, are some of the pivotal matters which should be considered by policymakers. Deciding about these points without asking the young opinions will lead to improper and impractical decisions, since all of them are directly related to this group. Take for instance, education and it's needed facilities, Without consulting with young student, How elderly people can be aware about right instrument, research sources and so on?
Furthermore, from psychological aspects, the young people should contribute in making important decisions as to society. Preventing young people in participating in mentioned area and ignoring them, in their most crucial conjuncture of life, will evoke plentiful problems. They will presume that, they are not eligible to decide about critical issues and the place which they live. This notion may cause other problems such as depression, alienation and also ruin their self confidence which , I personally believe, is not good for societies development and future, due to the fact that, the young group are the chief workforce of societies.
Last but not least, young people are replete with ingenious ideas about various areas. Generally, they are more cognizant of technology, for instance Internet, science and so forth. They have studied in advanced schools and universities with state of the art facilities in comparison with the people in past, which endow them with miscellaneous skills in different fields. It stands to reasons to consider this source of knowledge in societies pivotal decisions and rules.
In a nutshell, I believe that contribution of the young people attitude and knowledge in nations plans and decisions is evitable for the reasons stated above and I strongly believe, their cooperation will be helpful for all strata of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: state-of-the-art
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Suggestion: in the past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38407494145 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76515014644 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555035128806 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3291288563 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.6875 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6875 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236551146446 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829537595779 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668312908413 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135131823937 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483462162537 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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