Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is important for children to learn how to make decisions for themselves and be responsible for their decisions. In my opinion, today's children are more likely to decide on their own and be more responsible than who were in the past. There are several reasons for me to explain my notions.
To begin with, children are educated so well today that they are able to make decisions about their lives. Take my cousin as example. My cousin is about 8 years old. One day, his parents did not come to school to bring him home. So he had to go back to home on his own. Maybe going home on their own was difficult for young children in the past while it is not hard for him. This is because his teacher in the elementary school has taught him how to go home and how to take public transportation.
Second, children in the present receive more useful information from media to help them make decisions. Take the recent news for example. It is illegal for people to bring pork from China to Taiwan because of existence of virus. The authority has spread this policy using news, Youtube and newspaper. Everyone knows this issue including children. Some children in Taiwan found some pork products in their class. They immediately took them to the police because they perceive that it is dangerous.
Finally, today's parent give more money to their kids so that children have more opportunities to make decisions and practice for making decisions. For example, my cousin received more money from his parents than I received before so that he could make more decisions on what to buy for himself. he also could transfer these experiences to the next buying time. Actually, He has learned which combinations of goods are cheaper.
In conclusion, many people may assert that children in the present are able to make better decisions for their lives. I am no exception. For the reasons mentioned in each paragraphs, I totally approve that today's children are educated better and rich enough to know how to decide on their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73654390935 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49835230473 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495750708215 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0294162669 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7083333333 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304886900283 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082251957153 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944268501954 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184222024008 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628800645614 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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