Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Despite the fact that many people consider that we do not have to take care of other events occurring around the world, I hold totally different attitude toward this thought. It is important for us to know other issues happening in the different areas in the world. There are several reasons for me to explain my notion.
Firstly, knowing other issues around the world helps us broaden our horizons. Take me for example. I have never been to another country until my graduation from college. At that time I thought it unnecessary for me to receive extra information of other countries. However, after I went to Japan as my trip to celebrate my graduation, I realized that it was important for us to get information from other countries because it helped us to keep track of the trend of today's world.
Furthermore, we can help other nations when they are in difficult situations immediately, and they will return to help us when we face difficulty. For instance, when Japan were hit by the big earthquake, Taiwan supported them with some helping teams and money about several billion dollars. Therefore, when Taiwan were also hit by the earthquake, the Japan government sent their people to help Taiwan for finding missing people. It is a wonderful thing that two different countries help each other when some disasters happening.
Finally, knowing news from other countries helps us to improve our society. By taking other nations' policies as reference, we can transfer their experiences and thoughts to enhance our country. Taking Taiwan for example, there were several epidemic diseases prevailing in Taiwan such as hepatitis B. Initially, the government did not know where hepatitis came from and how to deal with this type of disease until the Australian scientists discovered the mechanism of hepatitis B. Furthermore, scientists in Taiwan were aware of the discoveries quickly ,and they started to prevent the happening of hepatitis B from the experiences of Australian.
In conclusion, I consider it significant for us to know about other events around the world even they may not impact our lives. For these reasons mentioned in each paragraph, I think we actually benefit from the information of other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08991825613 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76520445512 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506811989101 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7485760519 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3157894737 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145677926008 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533934059026 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601632445963 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101084847333 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461870650683 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.