Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars.
Use examples and reasons to support your position.
Although there are many people considering that the university education should be supplied to all interested scholars free, I have a different attitude toward this view. I think that it is not suitable for college education to charge nothing. There are several reasons for me to explain it.
First, the free university education may have poor quality because the college doesn't have enough money to give salary to professors and maintain the class. For example, I was a college student in Taiwan. I have attended a speech class which was free for everyone. However, although the topic of the speech was so attracting, the professors invited were not so good. They talked something basic and not professional. Furthermore, the classroom was not tidy because there was no staff responsible for maintaining the room.
Second, if the college education was free, no student would cherish it. If every university student does not have to pay for class, they will quit the class easily because every student prefers to go outside for entertainment. Take my classmates for example. Everyone in my department had to pay for the biology class but it cost less. Even though every student definitely had to be charged for the class, several students chose to go to see the movie because it cost them less money.
Finally, if the university gets enough money, higher quality of professors will be recruited so that overall teaching quality will be improved. Take my college for example. The enrollment of my school increased last year so that the college recruited more professors who graduated from good universities. Actually , they taught well. We also enjoyed the contents they have taught us.
In conclusion, although many people consider it better not to charge for university education, I think it is wrong. It is good for every student to pay for high quality of teachers and classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07051282051 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6971744801 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509615384615 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.920862618 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108590108028 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361477713794 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482243688565 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797090809269 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674227492805 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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