Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today insane machinery period has modified the essence of human lives. Views differ when it comes to the issue whether in the future there will be fewer cars compared to today. I believe, however, in twenty years later we will see fewer cars due to the advancement of technology, and the awareness of people about harms of using the cars.
The first aspect to point out is that in the future technology has progressed to point where there will be more effortless to transport. One of the comforts of living in the hectic modern life is that people enjoy from being relaxed of the amenities that provide from transportation's companies. That is to say, they will suggest you a tranquil travel like a first class flight of today. Every seat well-equipped with a high-speed internet connection, comfort place, and monitor screen for each person. They will perceive the drastic effects of comforts of these vehicles in their lives soon after using them. The public transportation will promote to point where they can go everywhere they want as well. We know there are so many projects under construction to make the transportation easier which will prepare in the future.
A further more subtle point is that people are wise enough to contemplate the difficulties of using their cars in the future. This viewpoint has started from a couple of years ago that people stopped using their cars. Take the case of European countries, or southeastern parts of Asia. Their people have understood that using fossil fuels have so many detrimental to the atmosphere. They use bicycles instead of fancy cars. Not only do bicycles not any harms to the environment, but also it is an exercise for them lead losing their extra weights. Nowadays scientists are warning people about obesity and heart disease from being sedentary. They suggest people be active during the day. In fact, bicycles provide an opportunity for people to do exercise beside of working.
To summarize, it should be emphasized that the development of technology in twenty years later as well as the matureness of next generation leads to understanding the disadvantages of using their cars. It is high time we stopped overlooking the fact that the high quality and comfort travels can change people's perspective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'tranquil travel'.
Suggestion: tranquil travel
.... That is to say, they will suggest you a tranquil travel like a first class flight of today. Eve...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ent of technology in twenty years later as well as the matureness of next generati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, in fact, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00791556728 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72808163183 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540897097625 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1007698058 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.380952381 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0476190476 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216249920348 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637089041459 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511743114298 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14176221204 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580638412051 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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