Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is viewed as a bad quality for a person to have. But now, it is considered as a good quality of a person. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, there is a controversial discussion amid psychologists to evaluate human beings’ prosperity in life due to the time that is consumed for creating a decision in harsh conditions. Even though some people suppose that spending time is a good factor for human's personality, I do believe that it has a profound negative impact on people's life, on which I will elaborate my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, the people's attitudes in facing a hard circumstance, such as fast responding to the vital problems, indicates their inherit personality that has a considerable influence on others behaviors toward them that can help them to prosper or fail in their life. To be more specific, people in a hard situation face a significant amount of stress since they scare to cannot handle the situation and consequently lose their chances, monetary deposits, family, and friend. In this regard, other try to put humans in such a condition to measure their ability in controlling their feeling and stress, and if they cannot come up the condition, they would not be able to cope with the more harsh problems in their future. Thus, people should to show a try make decision in a short time to short their self-confidence to other in conquering the stress and creating the best decisions.
Secondly, in todays sophisticated world, which the technology is growing swiftly, creating a swift decisions help you to challenge the competitors in competitions. To be more accurate, people are facing with a vast variety of the demands and suggestions for improving or collapsing their future, so if they cannot make a fast decision to employ these conditions or ignore them would decline their opportunities in life. For instance, fifteen years ago, the Google, the biggest technological company in world, tried to buy the yahoo website, the second big search engine company in technology industry, for one hundred million dollars, but the yahoo bosses tried to take some time to consult with their colleagues; while the Yahoo managers decided to accept the offer, the Google had had an agreement with the Bing company, the biggest competitor of the yahoo. This, making a fast decision in critical times can help people to prosper their life in future.
To sum up, getting new and fast decisions plays a pivotal role in humans’ life and affects on their life exceedingly. Not only do providing swift results in hard situation help to show a great self-confidence, especially in controlling the stress, but it also helps to grasp the life's golden opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 780, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
...decided to accept the offer, the Google had had an agreement with the Bing company, the...
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Line 6, column 946, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s can help people to prosper their life in future. To sum up, getting new and fast dec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08490566038 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92559323277 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8403729889 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.666666667 100.406767564 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110981784552 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04704765471 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292840410978 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700383614022 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035230767891 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 11.7677419355 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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