Cars have become a basic mode of transportation for many of us because it is more comfortable and prevents us from outside environment which is important when there is rain outside. In my opinion, the number of cars is going to increase further rather than a decrease in twenty years from now, and that is why innovators are constantly developing new means of public transportation. The reasons for my opinion are mentioned in the following essay.
First of all, more people are now capable of buying cars than those 30 years ago. In other words, more people can afford a car nowadays than previously because poverty is reducing throughout the world. Various Government schemes all over the world have decreased poverty from 60% in 1970 to just around 20% in 2017, according to a recent survey. Now, a major percentage of the population lives in a middle-income level rather than below the poverty line. Consequently, more people want to enjoy the benefits of having a car because they can afford it.
Furthermore, the cost of the consumer vehicles are very low and are going to decrease more in the future. Many of the automobile companies like Maruti Suzuki, Toyota, Ford Motors, etc., are constantly developing new techniques, models, or technology which would further reduce the cost of a car in the future. This would allow even the people who are in lower middle-income level to buy a car easily with a car loan or even without it too. So, as a result, the number of cars would increase.
The reason why people buy cars is that public transportation is not fast and people generally get to work late, they are sometimes dirty and not at all comfortable because countless people traveling at the same time, this problem is amplified especially in a highly populated city. However, as the Government of each and every nation knows this, they are encouraging the scientists and inventors to develop a better means of public transportation that is more comfortable, reliable, clean, and fast.
In the end, because of the decreasing poverty throughout the world and cheap availability of the cars in the future, I think, the number of cars will increase until a good and reliable means of public transportation isn’t made available by Government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...sn't made available by Government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, i think, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9501312336 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85953156973 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514435695538 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9474960703 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.733333333 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123440826759 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465326092438 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036780933049 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702410625965 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299593194152 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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