Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in on specific subject.
There is no shortage of debate wheather you should have broad understanding of dozens of acadmic passages or just draw attention to a specific subject. In my opinion,This modern world require a person, who knows more academic subjects. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will expoler in the following essay.
First, having a lot of information about many academic subjects will make you most likely person to be accepted in any job interview. Now a days every company searching for an employee, who knows more and have more knowledge. For exmaple, to my myself, when I was studying my bachelor degree in Civil Engineering, I decided to work on many academic issues besides engineering, for example, learning computer, academic writing essay, proposal writing and so on. when I finished my university term I had better opportunity to find a better due to having more information in addtion to my profession field. That is why it is important to have more knowledge about academic essays.
Secondly, it helps you for some specific test, like TOEFL ibt. this test requires to have enormous knowledge in your mind to obtain a high score. For example, when I started to prepare my self for the TOEFL, I had no clue about biology academic texts, so when I handle the test I could not finish the task well-enough. At that time I realized to study biology and other staff in order to take my desire score and enter to universities. For this case, the more you know the more you get the score.
Thirdly, it gives you a hand to be more perfect and relax guy.No one born to select their habits and chrikter, but they choose by their own, so having less knowledge put you in the dark side. For example, we see many families that have more argument and they are not happay relationship, so they get divorce soon due to less knowledge of future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , This
...ion to a specific subject. In my opinion,This modern world require a person, who know...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will expoler in the following essay. First, having a lot of information about...
^^^^
Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...on to be accepted in any job interview. Now a days every company searching for an employee...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...o be accepted in any job interview. Now a days every company searching for an employee...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...maple, to my myself, when I was studying my bachelor degree in Civil Engineering,...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more knowledge about academic essays. Secondly, it helps you for some specific...
^^^^
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...for some specific test, like TOEFL ibt. this test requires to have enormous knowledg...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you know the more you get the score. Thirdly, it gives you a hand to be more ...
^^^
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...a hand to be more perfect and relax guy.No one born to select their habits and chr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, i feel, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67076923077 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61340377476 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572307692308 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4392263576 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212546316612 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772827076574 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554653793108 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134904112525 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418367163232 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.