Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
While some people think access to so many details through the internet come up with troubles. Personally, I think the internet gives us abundant valuable information. I think this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, with the internet, we can easily understand about processes in markets like stock market which is prominent to those who wants to invest. When you put your money on something worthy you must have background information, so internet safe you. For example, a colleague's of mine who is working with a great company she mentioned a history that when she first joined to a company there is was no access to the internet so they can not figure out how to boost up their products and which beneficial investment they should go for. His boss said, "This situation freaks me out, Find a way!". Then, she offered the internet as their pill, now, they are in a good situation in the stock market it is all come back to the internet.
Second, the internet provides priceless data that put you on save the hand. without having clue about circumstances you can not assure to be alive when you get out. For me, when I go out or go to any event, I always search on the internet about exact security information, like is there any critical issue in this consensus or not? why they held this at this place? Who will get into the event? What will happen if everything is not on track? Therefore, I use the internet to know exactly what will happen and if it happened, what should I do. The Internet acts like a hero for me.
Third, there are lots of contexts that we can not learn in a class or teachers might miss up, here is the internet can help you out and fulfill your desire. For instance, I remember since I enrolled in school there is no access to the internet after a while internet got accessed in my place, I realized how much information I lost in school, and start reading books in order to catch the required level. Moreover, when I join university I did not depend to my professors, I constantly checked the internet for my lessons rather than lecturers, so it helped me to become a successful Civil Engineer, even know I am using the internet to get information to design, construct, and manage the projects.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the internet gives you priceless information. It gives you update information about markets. It provides you worthy information about situations. Moreover, It makes independent to learn and enhance your ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a colleague' or simply 'colleagues'?
Suggestion: a colleague; colleagues
...ion, so internet safe you. For example, a colleagues of mine who is working with a great com...
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...hen she first joined to a company there is was no access to the internet so they c...
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Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... she first joined to a company there is was no access to the internet so they can n...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...ess data that put you on save the hand. without having clue about circumstances you can...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
...ritical issue in this consensus or not? why they held this at this place? Who will ...
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Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...ecome a successful Civil Engineer, even know I am using the internet to get informat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, third, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69213483146 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65116544131 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525842696629 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4801517565 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7826086957 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275325287827 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774780055974 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677552701442 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164800970344 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739548957146 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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