Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor.
We are living in a sophisticated age which friends have a profound impact on one’s life. People are always trying to make their lives more convenient, delightful and successful. Some people believe that it is better to have friends having a good sense of humor. However, others believe that having friends who are intelligent is better. After carefully pondering it from several aspects, I think the advantages of having intelligent friends clearly outweigh the other option. For this reason, I strongly and without agree with the latter idea. There are some reasons, the most important of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, undoubtedly, problems are the inevitable parts of people’s lives. As a matter of fact, when you encounter a serious problems, you anticipate that your friends help you to solve your problem. Under this circumstance, a friend who is intelligent is able to find a great solution to solve your problem. To illustrate this fact, one only needs to refer to the number of prosperous people who thank to having intelligent people could solve their problem easily. Seldom do people have a sense of humor are able to help you, because they are not serious in encountering issues. What is result from having intelligent friends are to increase your self-esteem in facing with problems. The noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that the high percentage of people are having intelligent friends, do not have problem to pass their course in the schools or universities because those students help weak student in their lessons.
The second reason why I agree with it is that, obviously, people’s personality influenced by their friends easily. If some people have intelligent friends, they will be successful in a long term. Because they learn how to think and how to manipulate their issues due to having friends. The modern world offers abundant examples of people who could enhance their lives quality, are ones who have intelligent friends because these people’s behavior and manner have remarkable effects on their friends. Although people need to become friends with people who have sense of humor, you spend your time with these people just in your leisure time and you should allocate your valuable and useful time to be with ingenious people. In addition to aforementioned notes, there is a well-known proverb in Persian, the equivalent of which in English may sound like this “the more student have intelligent friends, the more they would be successful in their future”. The proverb clarifies the fact that since students are supposed to attend the society in the near future, they should make friendship with intelligent people because it brings them several lucrative consequences such as increasing their knowledge to become prosperous in the future.
To make a long story short, no one can deny the enormous positive effect of having intelligent friends. Not only are they able to solve their problem easily with consulting with them, but also they could learn how to think and how to manage issues in order to become successful in their lives. For this reason, I highly recommended that people make new friendship with intelligent person
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...r of fact, when you encounter a serious problems, you anticipate that your friends help ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, i think, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2739.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 528.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75722127155 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462121212121 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0204909688 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393972346037 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141803014056 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118099296283 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276313295733 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11113311368 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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