Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor.
Without a shadow of a doubt, In the given hectic life, Friends exert tremendous influence on every individual living in a myriad of facets. An unanswered question in this area is that whether making friends in regard to peoples' intellectual quotients is a superb approach or establishing relationships based on a good sense of humor. Despite all the arguments asserting that an excellent sense of humor and manner is a decisive factor while choosing friends, I believe otherwise, maintaining that selecting intelligent friends plays a pivotal role in amending ones' dominant lifestyle. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two compelling reasons.
First and foremost, Ones' personality is mostly affected by the close people surrounding them, and these intimate relationships are usually comprised of friends. In other words, People spend a substantial amount of time with their friends, like while they are at school or university, or going for a daily walk. Therefore, the unconscious implications of friends' attitudes on individuals' behaviors and mindsets will be inevitable in the long run. In addition, intelligence coupled with hard work seeds the plant of momentous achievements. As a result, allocating time to intercourse with ingenious people and getting their opinion for an advantageous approach to their target can help one expeditiously accomplish their goals. My personal experience is a persuasive example of this. During one of my courses at university, I grouped with a brilliant student to work on our final project, and I saw myself vastly thriving in both the project and my personal academic skills.
Another reason to be mentioned is that sometimes, getting through an arduous circumstance is better possible with advice from knowledgeable and smart friends who can make the justified decisions than friends who merely try to make you feel better and forget the dilemma. To put it more simply, while this situation occurs, intelligent friends help you choose the right way wisely because they have undergone such a situation and have got rid of it, or they can predict the consequences through lots of thinking. On the contrary, kind friends who make jokes or try to make you feel better do not really figure out a way to solve the problems and alleviate the obstacles, yet, they change ones' mood temporarily. Furthermore, they might try helping you end the situation with irrational decisions, or sometimes with irreversible results which have been made out of sentiments.
Reflecting upon all reasons mentioned above, one soon realizes that having intelligent friends is much more essential than friends that just have a good sense of humor, and as one has said: "If you want to know yourself, look at the 5 closest people around you".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, therefore, while, in addition, as a result, in other words, in regard to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2363.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26280623608 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97464246176 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58574610245 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9899185352 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.6875 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0625 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341395042422 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893658627121 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874426334267 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203973565861 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112744350639 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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