It is better for people to have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor
The priority of selecting which kind of friends has been a hot topic in society and it is invested with different opinions from different people: smartness is better than the sense of humor that is considered as reasonable by some may be regarded as unreasonable by others. As far as I am concerned, the sense of humor is less important than intelligence.
First of all, clever friends can assist people to overcome difficulties. One direct benefit of this for people is that they can easily be helped out. For instance, when students have bad grades of some subjects, their friends who are smart enough are able to teach them after school class and aid them to overcome the hard questions. As for those intelligent students, they know how to help their friends develop their study quickly like sharing their class notes, teach their friends the steps of solving math questions… Thus if people were ships, the clever friends would be wave only by which the ships could go straightly and easily.
Besides, another factor that should be taken into consideration is that it not means friends who are intelligent are not humor enough. On the other hand, they may much more humor than others because they are smart enough to know how to cheer others up at a suitable time. For instance, some humor friends may laugh at others when they face some trouble but these clever friends may tell them some funny stories to cheer their friends up.
Finally, the above doesn’t seem to explain completely and something else is going on. It is the quality of these intelligent friends. Studying and staying with them can help people develop their various aspects of ability. When people’s friends are likely to exercise to relax themselves, they can also influence the people around them and let others know the goodness of exercise. Thus, making intelligent friends that is true for getting help from them is also true for developing people’s quality.
In conclusion, smart friends will be appreciated and that is because not only they can help people out during hard time but also they can aid others to make progresses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ds the steps of solving math questions… Thus if people were ships, the clever friend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, so, thus, as for, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91388888889 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53877187914 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7554159686 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.933333333 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325181921046 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103679521097 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580327905834 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16027830642 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590880715868 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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