Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our world have changed entirely by rising the aspects of globalization and modernization. Technological advances in communication and information makes mankind to have more information in an accelerate velocity which never be possible in the past. Modern media like television, internet, and virtual social networks like Facebook and tweeter are broadcasting a wide spectrum of news which many of them seems to be not important for people. But it should be noted that following news by people has impressive effects for international society, and profitable uses for individuals as well.
Today, there are many violent around the world and people should concern about them and do some philanthropic activities to stop them. War is a well-known word around the world especially in some parts like Middle East. If different media propagate the news of this unethical trend people will be more attend in the campaigns to support cessation of them. For example, more knowledge about these events will lead people build more request for governments and international society, so it will be more money which will be invested on the security in the world.
Being well-informed about some economic events around the world opens doors of opportunity for people. Some economic and financial trends are related like a chain in all over the world. For instance one event in UK could cause an opportunity in the companies in other countries. By distinction of UK from Europe, the value of Pond have decreased and some companies which are working on tourism found an opportunity in tours which are destined to London.
Having information about everything happening all over the world is a criteria of how people look sophisticated and erudite in the society. In the far past, people who were literate, were the people who have known as skilled and informative people. Today, it is necessary for people to know about world news, even have strong analysis about new events. For example, a university professor in the field of art, supposed to have a great sense about the political events in the world.
There are many different devices in our hands which help us to now about our world. Newspapers, television channels, social networks, etc., and we should learn to use them efficiently in our daily life. Although it has some drawbacks, the advantages outweigh it disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...kes mankind to have more information in an accelerate velocity which never be possible in the...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecially in some parts like Middle East. If different media propagate the news of t...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a criterion' or simply 'criteria'?
Suggestion: a criterion; criteria
...rything happening all over the world is a criteria of how people look sophisticated and er...
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Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...tical events in the world. There are many different devices in our hands which help us to n...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269503546099 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.137115839243 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0992907801418 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0236406619385 0.046263068375 51% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0378250591017 0.0685040099705 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151300236407 0.118717715034 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0354609929078 0.0351676179071 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86471923319 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0921985815603 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189125295508 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212765957447 0.0139019557991 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2374.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 386.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15025906736 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347150259067 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264248704663 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20725388601 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147668393782 0.112833075102 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86471923319 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523316062176 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.7038162433 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3157894737 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1443989208 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.947368421 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 46.74065994 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.29761904762 1.45489161554 158% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276346386523 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114133700717 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0638013818176 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531599520342 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0956571489349 0.151897553556 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113673084483 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517681833101 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324726486247 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0834646484469 0.067059652881 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18426796045 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592096834537 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.