Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
After the rise of industrialization, our world have initiated a more developed era. With the huge advances in communication, transportation, and information technology, the globalization have emerged and this trend of expanding of modern civilization intensified in an increasing velocity. This intricate circumstances have many special characteristics, and have compelled people, especially young people to deal with it by planning.
Modern era is more accelerated, and young people need to plan for their time to use it more efficiently. Time keeping is one of significant aspects of modernization. In modern society, it is essential for people to synchronize themselves with others. People should wake up early at the morning and start working or studying at a certain rigid time which have regulated by government. Most of prosperous people in this circumstances are the people who accept this regulation, furthermore build up a personal time schedule to use their time efficiently.
Today, everything is more specialized and it is necessary for people to focus on certain area with a precise plan. The knowledge of human have broaden after a revolution in information technology. Today, people supposed to be expert in a field. In the past, there were many people who had shallow but diverse information and skills. In contrast, today, it is more plausible for people to become well-skilled just in certain area. For instance, people can gain more money if they plan for a certain financial idea for their entire life.
Modern life is very competitive, so the success is right in the hand of people who ambitiously devise plans for it. Today, there are many people and companies who want increase their profit as much as possible. In this rival atmosphere, people should precisely know about their assets and their reliabilities. Besides the knowledge of the markets, and different aspects of risky decision making is important as well. For this purpose, the role of planning is more and more crucial.
Modern life has brought unprecedented situation for young people. To deal with its aspects, people required to have certain skills like using internet and computer, having leadership skills, having ability to deal with stress, and controlling personal emotions. Planning is one of the vital abilities of modern life as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...overnment. Most of prosperous people in this circumstances are the people who accept...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'broadened'.
Suggestion: broadened
...ecise plan. The knowledge of human have broaden after a revolution in information techn...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242206235012 0.261695866417 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.153477218225 0.158904122519 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117505995204 0.0723426182421 162% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479616306954 0.0435111971325 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383693045564 0.0277247811725 138% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129496402878 0.128828473217 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0455635491607 0.0370669169778 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.09699633315 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263788968825 0.0208969081088 126% => OK
Particles: 0.00479616306954 0.00154638098197 310% => OK
Determiners: 0.0647482014388 0.128158765124 51% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00719424460432 0.0158828679856 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119904076739 0.0114777025283 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2342.0 1645.83664459 142% => OK
No of words: 371.0 271.125827815 137% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31266846361 6.08160592843 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.04852973271 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390835579515 0.374372842146 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285714285714 0.287516216867 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215633423181 0.187439937562 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169811320755 0.113142543107 150% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09699633315 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522911051213 0.539623497131 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.8927694207 53.8517498576 106% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0529801325 169% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8636363636 21.7502111507 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8583776574 49.3711431718 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.454545455 132.220823453 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 21.7502111507 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.878197800319 41% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 45.4350649351 50.5018328374 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.74 1.90840788429 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418097474087 0.549887131256 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0766932651474 0.142949733639 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0556552429225 0.0787303798458 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486243573175 0.631733273073 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119046213889 0.139662658121 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15274687853 0.266732575781 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827713263794 0.103435571967 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.336972969145 0.414875509568 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0510137669825 0.0530846634433 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285085258736 0.40443939384 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037540024634 0.0528353158467 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 3.49668874172 343% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.62251655629 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.2958057395 146% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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