Working environment is very crucial component at any job. Some people believes that working only three days a week for long hours is much enjoyable. While others believes that fives days for shorter hours is more reasonable. I personally prefer to work fives days for shorter hours. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, working shorter hour keep our health more stable for longer time. Working longer hours makes us tired after that we may not able to perform other task of daily life. When we take longer break from work we become lazy which makes our health worse just siting at home. Constant work is good exercise for both our body and mind which is essential for stable health. For instance, I was working at hospital for five days for shorter hours but due to circumstances I increase my working hours but I started for 3 days which makes me tired every day and rest of days I spent sleeping at home. In my experience working shorter hours is more enjoyable and keep us healthy.
In addition to health, working more days we can enjoy the life at works such as office or any other place we work. working shorter hours we have enough time to spend with friends at works and we can go outing we can makes plane for trip after finish work early. Also we can give enough time to family we return home early and pend more tie with family. working longer hours we can't manage time for family and friends. Relations need some time to spend with them in this busy life people have no time for relations so working five days in shorter times one can give plenty of times to families.
By way of conclusion, I firmly believes that working shorter hours is more beneficial for persons health point of views also we can enjoy the office or campus b giving enough time to relations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52777777778 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14517274782 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0230289278 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335629623957 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147252086114 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078745633726 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241044148972 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100527116241 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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