Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to students to understand ideas and facts, than it is for them to learn facts.
Use specific reasons and answers to support your answer.
Training students in an appropriate way is one of the most important things that societies and families are concerned about. Students like different things to learn but personally, I believe that understanding ideas and concepts is more valuable for students than learning some facts. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, understanding ideas and engaging with concepts causes students to improve current ideas and sometimes make new ones. Therefore, we will have more creative children who can do big works in the future. My own experience is compelling evidence of this point. When I was a high school student, I had a friend that was very active in the classroom and never gave up the class without understanding all the points behind each lesson. She was so curious and this diligence helped her to find new points in our physics class about automobiles. She designed a new genuinely electronic car that could move with the lowest amount of energy. This example shows that paying attention to concepts and ideas will help us to have a more productive mind.
Second, ideas and concepts are more attractive than some facts that students just have to memorize them. Teaching facts to students will not be practical for them in the future, and they will get to forget all of them after a short time. For instance, in our high school we had a chemistry teacher that her approach was only stating the facts in each lesson. Not only does this class so boring but it also had no practical points for the students. Nobody could understand why these facts are happening and the materials were so ambiguous. As a result, the students could not answer some creative questions in the exams, and gained low scores in chemistry. This experience demonstrates that learning facts do not help the students without knowing their concepts, and also, students do not like this approach.
In sum, I am of the opinion that it is more valuable and vital for students to understand ideas and concepts, rather than learning facts. It is because students can make new ideas or improve the previous ones and because learning facts is boring and students can not use them practically in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
Training students in an appropriate way is one of the most important things tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88219895288 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57586302248 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492146596859 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8378836701 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1578947368 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282015497963 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867360429976 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803856812478 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191650508481 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054922911802 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.