Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, spending money to improve public transportation is more important than improve internet access because it can have a greater impact on the daily life of its citizens. Although internet is today a basic need in our society, transport system has always been at the top on the list of priorities. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, transportation creates links in a society, where everyone could make its activities and contribute to the group as a whole. For example, a raise of that should allow people to find jobs far away from its home because they knows there is a path that it can take in order to arrive on a distant place with a big quality journey. As a consequence, persons looks for better jobs and the possibility to meet it increase if you make applications in a bigger area.
Secondly, the cost of implementation of internet is not as huge as the necessary investment on roads, highway, subways, and other kind of things related to transportation. Drawing from the experience of lots of countries, it is common to the private and public sector making an investment together in the transport sector for the excessive money you could spend in an infrastructure, but it is not the same with telephone companies, which tend to put money for increasing the internet coverage. As a result, people would like the government to take part actively on the second alternative.
Besides, the internet will require the use of electronic devices that perhaps not all the population can afford, instead of the use of system transport, which should benefit a larger group of persons. To my mind, the taxes will be allocated in policies what has a higher goal public inasmuch as the income of government is not unlimited, so we must spend it wisely.
In conclusion, I do not agree with the earlier statement. this is because the deep gap is worse on the second issue, so the authorities must focus on it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...obs far away from its home because they knows there is a path that it can take in ord...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...ter jobs and the possibility to meet it increase if you make applications in a bigger ar...
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Line 17, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...o not agree with the earlier statement. this is because the deep gap is worse on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80289855072 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8668351821 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8784967297 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.461538462 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246200891124 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757885953298 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083521700702 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119798627837 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702206529291 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.