Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that having a lot of friends can make your live more exiting and fun. Yet, there could be a debate over the importance of keeping our old friends and making new friends. However, I believe that by keeping our old friends we can benefit more than trying to make new friends. I feel that way for some reasons that I will discuss in this essay.
To begin with, sticking with our old friends plays a significat role in our everydays live. First, it helps us to make our lives easier. From my personal experience, I have learned that old friends are always there, whenever you need something. I remember, the other day there was a havy snow in our place and my old and close friend knew that I would not be able to clean my car, and make it to work. She knew that because I had hurt my leg a day before the snow. So, she called me and asked if I want her to come over and pick me up. Of course I accepted her offer. But, if she would be a new friend she would not do that, because she might think I would not accept her help, or maybe she would not think about me at all. It takes time to make friends that can think abot you when you are in bad situations.
Another major consideration is that knowing people for long time can bring happiness in our live. This is because they know you and they know what makes you happy. For example, my brodher has a good friend from hight school who always caries for my brother happines. One thing that my brother always liked is to have a vaccation in Hawaii. But because of not having the money to afford the expenses to there, he never got ot realize his big dream. Thus, his old friend knew that. Luckily, after he graduated in bussiness, he got a job in aeroport. From there he had some propotions with flights tickets, and one day he got a huge disscount for Hawaii. He gave the promotion code to my brother, and that way he finally visited his deram contry. Because of his old friend, my brother was so happy to make that trip.
In summary, having friends always make you feel alive and important, but keeping your old friend forever can make you realize your big dreams without any effort. Most of the time your old friends can be your best friends.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, i feel, in summary, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26603325416 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15230475312 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489311163895 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6630361079 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.84 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.84 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.24 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273088002589 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826921086665 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893996671388 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215174702896 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118101147601 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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