Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is always a best thing to do, especially when you travel with a group of friends. No doubts, if there is a tour guide it makes is more fun and interesting. Personally, I strongly agree with the statement made above.
To begin with, I would say traveling in a group led by a tour guide is always the right thing to do. I feel this way because of my own experiences I had with traveling. Couple years ago, about seven or eight years earlier, when I was in the third year of high school, we decided to visit Albania, a country near by Macedonia wich is my hometown. None of us knew anything abot this country, neather the language.One of my frind came up with an briliant idea to hire a gay who was going to show us the most beautiful places there, also help us to find a place to stay. We all agreed with this suggestion. We found a young men who knew Albania pretty well. He came with us, and showed us the best of that country. He guded us for three days in a row. And made it possible for us to see those interesting places,like beaches in the south side of Albania, the historical monument in a city called Kruja, and taste many delicious native food, like ballokume which is sugar coockie made with korn flour. This was the coockie they usully cook to celebrate the spring day. They were celebrating this day on March fourthinth, to alert the arrival of the most beutiful season.
Furthermore, having a tour guide is saveier when you go to a place that is not familiar to you. So the tour giude will help to to find a hospital if needed. For instance, one of my friend visited Turkey all by herself, and she got very sick one day there. She had hard time to find a hospital nerby, because she didnt know the lanuage spoken in that country. If she would have a tour guide, she would not have that problem, because he would help her immediately.
To sum up, travelling is always a good idea, and having someone who would help you to explore the countries you want to visit makes it ever better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, third, well, for instance, i feel, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31481481481 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39665749205 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3006216662 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.55 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180991627433 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619774278563 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075154694319 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131509581323 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876484653112 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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